yep - the marker pen-escaping-the-lines gives really energy and immediacy - like the mushroom forest; consider in your next round of thumbnails exploiting the foreground more - interrupt your views with bold silhouettes - something for peering past/through - use occlusion to draw your viewer deeper and deeper. Thus far, you've got very uninterrupted views, and by working with your foreground more, you'll be able to create the impression of being 'in' these spaces as opposed to being in some privileged 'third person' orbit - go for more subjectivity and an experiental pov...
Looking great. Nice mark making :) Hmm, I really need to try markers more.
ReplyDeleteyep - the marker pen-escaping-the-lines gives really energy and immediacy - like the mushroom forest; consider in your next round of thumbnails exploiting the foreground more - interrupt your views with bold silhouettes - something for peering past/through - use occlusion to draw your viewer deeper and deeper. Thus far, you've got very uninterrupted views, and by working with your foreground more, you'll be able to create the impression of being 'in' these spaces as opposed to being in some privileged 'third person' orbit - go for more subjectivity and an experiental pov...
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