Your story I like, but until you post an animatic or similar, we can't really get to discussing its execution in any meaningful way. There's not an essay structure on here either. Get these elements up and posted asap. Meg will be working closely with you on Friday to further refine/develop/edit your stories, so make the most of the session.
Interim Online Review 22/03/2011
ReplyDeletehey Dan,
Yes - Igor it is: "yesssss, maaaaaster"...
Your story I like, but until you post an animatic or similar, we can't really get to discussing its execution in any meaningful way. There's not an essay structure on here either. Get these elements up and posted asap. Meg will be working closely with you on Friday to further refine/develop/edit your stories, so make the most of the session.