Tuesday, 17 May 2011

Script V3

Since Blogger appears to have decided to lose my original upload of this -_- here it is again

Commission script 3

1 comment:

  1. Hey Dan - the mystery of blogger-based disappearances! Anyway, with the right kind of voice track (which I hope you're going to solicit professionally via voiceovers.co.uk!) it will work well; that said, I think you should personalise it more, but replacing 'their victim' with 'you' - as in, 'whenever your body's defences are breached...' Just makes it more about the audience etc.