Since I need to make sure that the villainous sidekick isn't in danger of overshadowing the real villain, I think he'd better suffer some simplification...
Captain Sidekick is big, strong, and very stupid. He obtained the position of captain through a moment of extremely good luck, and has kept it because he's sufficiently big to scare the pirates under him from any thought of mutiny. His world view is very simple (so simple, in fact, that there's a good chance he'd fall for the "look behind you!" gambit), and he has an almost puppy-like desire to please Admiral Villain.
I think that works a lot better. Its a good solution, Daniel
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